Poetry@lemmy.world · 3 months ago

[OC] [FB] Hot Minute

cheeseandkrakens@lemmy.blahaj.zone to

Poetry@lemmy.world · 3 months ago

The longest two months are between January and March

when you showed me how to take my time

So I took a hot minute and burned my calendar

I’d trade firsts for seconds if they include you

I don’t want to feel this week, I crave your strength

What’s mine is hours and I’ve plenty to give

Time is relative

and I’d like you to meet the family

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This is beautiful and brilliant. Very well done, OP. Thank you for sharing.
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  🫶 thanks!

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