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adhd_traco@piefed.social to Poetry@lemmy.worldEnglish · 2 days ago

Amanda Gorman, For Alex Jeffrey Pretti "Murdered by I.C.E January 24"

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Amanda Gorman, For Alex Jeffrey Pretti "Murdered by I.C.E January 24"

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adhd_traco@piefed.social to Poetry@lemmy.worldEnglish · 2 days ago
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    It doesn’t have meter or rhyme, so it isn’t a poem. I can’t believe people still don’t know what a poem is.

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      people still don’t know what a poem is

      Ah, so you’ve never heard of free verse poetry. It’s been around for a while.

      https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse

      https://www.poetryfoundation.org/categories/free-verse

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      Your definition of a poem might not hold up under scrutiny.

      “Poetry (from the Greek word poiesis, “making”[note 1]) is a form of literary art that uses aesthetic and often rhythmic[1][2][3] qualities of language to evoke meanings in addition to, or in place of, literal or surface-level meanings.”

      https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poetry

      Also, the form is intentional. She is an established poet.

      “Amanda S. C. Gorman[1] (born March 7, 1998[2]) is an American poet, activist, and model.”

      https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amanda_Gorman

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        She is an established poet.

        doesn’t matter, she knows what a poem is, so she needs to stop fucking with us and write an actual poem

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          It’s a poem. They don’t have to rhyme.

          Do you have anything to add here?

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            Yeah, what I have to add is that if you read my comment, you would know that a poem doesn’t have to rhyme. But if it doesn’t rhyme, it DOES have to have a meter, and Ms Gorman’s “poem” doesn’t even have that.

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      lol
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